For B2B SaaS
Score demo copy and nurture leads.
Trial pages, onboarding emails, and sales follow-ups — scored on the same five factors, so activation and replies never guess.
The leak
Where it quietly loses momentum
Three quiet leaks undercut most funnels — all of them fixable copy.
Trial pages that don't activate
Unclear value means users sign up and never come back.
Onboarding emails that get ignored
No clear next step, so the 'aha' moment never lands.
Outbound that sounds like everyone else
Cold emails read like a template and get deleted in seconds.
How it works
Four passes, one funnel
Try it
Watch the same rubric score two drafts
Switch between weak and strong copy. Scored with the same five-factor rubric as the platform — Clarity, Specificity, CTA strength, Persuasion, and Trust.
Weak onboarding email
Thanks for signing up. Our platform has many features. Please explore your dashboard.
Why it works
Real mechanics, no guesswork
One rubric for activation
The same five factors score trial pages, emails, and follow-ups.
Highlights show what to fix
Inline severity notes name the passage that's losing you activations.
Brand-voice rewrites
Every email and page stays on-voice, so outbound doesn't sound templated.
In action
Before and after an onboarding email
The same welcome email, before and after a Rewrite Copy pass.
Original welcome email
Thanks for signing up. Our platform has many features. Please explore your dashboard.
Everything in one platform
Built for how you actually work
Trial page scoring
Learn moreScore the copy that activates users.
Make the CTA an explicit action verb with a low-friction next step.
Onboarding & lifecycle rewrites
Learn moreRework emails to your brand voice.
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Direction · lead with the outcome, not the product
ICP lead lists
Learn moreVerified, filtered accounts for outbound.
Sales & support inbox
Learn moreInbound replies with full context.
FAQ
Questions from product teams
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